Here's one more poem for you... Enjoy
HASTA LA VISTA
an original poem by iDweeb
2004
Windows Vista, Windows vista, when will you ever come?
My PC's got viruses, spyware and bugs,
when will you save me and come?
XP's been dying, my processor's frying
When will this agony end?
My security's destroyed, and I am annoyed
that my computer sluggs so slowly along!
2005
Bill Gates will you save me, my data's all crazy
and all of my hard work is for naught
And so are the thousands of dollars I spent
on new hardware just last year I bought.
2006
I can't take the stresses and files in messes,
the unresponsive windows and folders,
Your OS will just freeze (reliability, please?)
and has functionality like that of a boulder
Why is it so that I spend so much dough
for an OS that leaks like a sieve?
If technology's here to make simlpler lives
then why such great headaches you give?
2007
That's it,I'm switching to a Mac!
Good on ya!
At least,we have some distraction from our daily technical life. The poem is well written. It is to the point. Nice work done,iDweeb !!
Thanks for your comments.
This poem was the result of reading a couple of other poems here and a bit of a coffee buzz- my addiction to the MAC OS helped too.
I've been given to writing ever since highschool, I guess. Shame I have precious few outlets for it lately though. I take it you write and/or have an interest in writing?
At any rate welcome to Applefritter, trackdaddy1!
Thanks again,
iDweeb.
Well written i(red)Dweeb
I'm all smiles
That poem is great. It definitly speaks to me, because I too am a mac addict sick of windows.
I think windows is ok sometims but I am a money preson (money is a crime ).....(pink floyd) but that was cool peace
I'm all smiles too, iSillyGirl
Love,
iDweeb